U and Me,
or was it,
Me and U…But does it matter?
Under the dark chestnut tree,
Soaking in the light,
of the setting sun,
sipping wine,
from each other’s lips…
As darkness envelopes,
we recline,
in each other’s arms,
Dreaming of a tomorrow,
that’s as distant as the setting sun…
Will you be mine? you ask,
and as I begin to answer,
my throat goes dry.
I look around and suddenly,
There’s nothing to quench my thirst.
I scream and shout,
but all in silence.
And suddenly I reach out,
to hold you…
but you are nowhere close….
What’s going on?
Why is everything turning against me?
I get up with a cold shudder,
Oh, so this was a dream?
I chide myself and go back to sleep,
Sleep eludes me for a while, so I think,
Dreams do turn real, don’t they?
With every sunset, I remember my dream,
And send affirmations to the universe,
Hoping it will bring you back to me.
We can spend time again watching the sunset.
U, Me and U again,
sipping wine in each other’s arms…
“This post is a part of ‘UMeU’ Poetry Blog Hop #UMeUBlogHop organized by Manas Mukul . The hop is brought to you by Soul Craft and You, Me & The Universe.”
Aww this was like watching a romantic film….. so well put Janaki
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Some dreams are so beautiful we don’t want to wake up to the reality! Very well written poem.
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This was heart touching, just felt so deep emotions don’t have words, a dream to be fulfilled only if they would turn to real🥺 just loved it.
May God almighty hear on your pleads and make your dreams real.
So well penned.✒️ am thankful to blogpost to able to read such touchy write-ups. Stay blessed and sorry for late comments.
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This was heart touching, just felt so deep emotions don’t have words, a dream to be fulfilled only if they would turn to real🥺 just loved it.
May God almighty hear on your pleads and make your dreams real.
So well penned.✒️ am thankful to blogpost to able to read such touchy write-ups.
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Dream and its eluding nature and hope well described with the rhythm of a beautiful poem
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Enjoyed the imagery. Romantic love is often surreal and often does feel like a dream.
We need to enjoy it while it lasts.
Your poem had a melancholic vibe beneath the romantic tone.
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Nice words.
Dreams seem so real that sometimes we need to check whether we are awake or still asleep.
Some people will always be a part of us and we can feel their presence even if they are no more…
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Would love to be on that beach sipping wine in someone’s arms. It is scary, the idea that we might loose someone so dear. I try affirmations and positive thoughts too when such fears creep into my subconscious. Whether it works, time will tell
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Well said, Janki Ji; some dreams are indeed so precious that we never want them to end or want to see them in the loop. You have beautifully penned the beauty of dream under the beauty of the sunset.
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As people say sometimes dreams can come true and I pray God to make me dream all good but that’s not what always happens, you do get those scary dreams of loosing someone close and sometime I do not want to dream. Loved the way you have expressed yourself.
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This indeed was a precious dream Janaki, I really enjoyed the weave and wish it did turn to reality, loved the impeccable weave.
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Dreams sometimes makes us to travel toa place that is far from reality and make us have the calming effect yet few dreams leave the longing feeling. Both the expressions were nicely written in the poetry.
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Such a beautiful poem. Some dreams are so beautiful and precious that you don’t want to go back to reality. So beautifully written. Loved it.
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This was a warm poem, for a moment a thought it was going to take a sad turn. Loved the flow and images. Beautifully written
Deepika
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Thanks a lot Deepika.
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I like the way the words are going so peaceful and smooth but suddenly the truth is revealed. I won’t lie it makes me sad. I want this dream to come true.
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This is heartwarming. Love the soft subtle nature of it. Do dreams come true or are we living in one such dream? I frequently question myself with such thoughts. This one has a soothing feel to it. Please keep writing poetry. You said you haven’t written and see here you wrote two pieces in a week.
#UMeUBlogHop
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Haha….Manas you’re being very kind. Thanks, anyway.
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What an amazing poem filled with romanticism and longing to belong to the beloved! Sometimes dreams are so beautiful that reality seems unecessary. Very well put.
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True that…..
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Sometimes, falling in love brings so much anxiety. Loved reading your poem and how you have expressed the feelings within. Keep writing.
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Thank you.
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Effortless play of words, soothing and surreal world of romance. Enjoyed reading this Janaki.
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Such lovely play of words – With every sunset, I remember my dream And send affirmations to the universe…
I can think of so much depth in these lines with so many thoughts doing rounds. Nice poem #UMeUBlogHop
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What a beautiful dream and I do hope it comes true. Positive affirmations will definitely work to make it true👍
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You recreated your dream for us so beautifully, Janaki. Reading this gave me goosebumps! Loved it!
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Your imaginary was awesome!! Loved the lines, so beautiful!!
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Dreams sometimes are our arena of solace and we need them so for all the pain in the real world… a dreamy getaway!
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